Filed under: In Woods
The setting is dark blue, almost indigo as the earliest
slivers of sunlight
to the east cast off the blanket of dark that
dominated this country only twenty minutes before.
The stars can still be seen, faintly,
just out of reach of the oncoming sunlight.
The hillside to the east that the sun seems to be slowly
ascending is bathed in color as the entire horizon
in this direction is a magnificent combination of
reds, yellows, purples,
and every imaginable hue in between.
Between us and the early sunrise, oak trees fill the portrait.
The oaks stand tall and sturdy,
almost regal in their stubbornness to withstand
this unforgiving country.
The leaves that once sprang from their
branches are mostly gone, as it is mid-November now.
Small, condensation-ridden spider webs sag
in between the mostly bare limbs,
webs few in number because most of the
woods-spiders have made their annual pilgrimage
back below the soil for winter.
In this early morning setting of peaceful emptiness
we can almost hear the sounds of a squirrel chittering,
or a turkey coming down from its roost.
When we look closer, however, we behold
an awesome sight. Steam pluming from its nostrils,
chest swelled proud, stands a mature male whitetail
that rivals even the stubborn oaks in girth.
Upon his head an astounding set of antlers,
contrasting with the darkness
so greatly that they appear alabaster in color.
He seems to be momentarily transfixed by the coming
sunrise that he views through the oaks,
the onset of another day.
In one of these stout oak trees, twenty feet
above the leaf litter of the forest floor,
the viewer spies a dark figure standing on a platform.
This dark figure, his back facing the eastward sun,
cares nothing about the picturesque horizon behind him.
The dark figure registers the chittering squirrels
with only the slightest acknowledgment.
The figure, in this moment, ignores
the rest of his surroundings. The figure is the epitome
of absolute concentration. He stands on a small
steel platform, facing us, never knowing or caring
that he is being watched in that instant of time.
He stands fully upright, back stiff, every muscle
and ligament in his body pulled taut in anticipation.
In the dark figure’s hands we see an instrument that –
although new in technology –
has been around for millennia. An instrument that,
having only started with wood and
dried animal sinew, has brought to a terminus
the existence of countless numbers of Man and Beast alike.
He holds a modern version of an ancient tool,
a fitting instrument considering he,
at the basest part of his existence,
is simply nothing more than
a modern version of an ancient Man.
His killing-tool drawn back, fingers
holding the string reaching back right
to the corner of his tightly pursed lips.
Guided in a downward angle, the arrow
poised to deliver a lightning-quick death-blow
whenever the Man wishes it to.
This man, with his dark camouflage draped from
head to toe, his face dissimulated by mixing the
right amounts of green, brown, and black paint.
Beyond the camouflage face-paint, a clenched jaw,
an image of grisly aplomb.
Set in this dour face are two eyes focused
in almost to the point of closed, thin white slits
that are completely immersed in the task at hand.
We cannot take our gaze away from the man’s eyes,
completely animated yet totally devoid of anything
that could be considered a human emotion.
One would take pity on anything that these eyes were focused on,
because it would see that these eyes are
unwavering, unflinching, barely human at all.
These eyes, despite their elaborate nerve network,
optical rods and cones, are only able to see
one action in this moment: The Kill.
We step back from the portrait and move on,
leaving Man and Beast, frozen in this small instant of time.
As we leave, we take notice once again
of the sun trying to peek out over the horizon,
and the faint stars of the night-sky
that are just out of reach of the oncoming sunlight.
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This was a great poem! The imagery was incredible. In my head I could see the sky how you described it, the dew on the ground, and the oak trees. I thought this piece was stellar. I hope you continue writing in the future. Having had 3 spanish classes with you now, I would have never guessed you could write like this!
Comment by wvian May 5, 2008 @ 5:44 am